About new page, CRASH

I just posted a very lengthy piece (5000 words) as a new page.  I worked on this for some time.  It is still in need of editing, but I am to the point that I would like some feedback.  The piece is divided into “bite size” segments.  If you leave comments, please let me know which CRASH you are commenting on.  This piece is the most revealing I’ve written to date, so while I welcome your comments AND critiques (which I need so that I can improve my writing,) please be courteous.  Thanks.  I look forward to reading your comments.

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